This summer I went to San Fransisco for vacation. The plane ride like all plane rides was boring and long. When we got to San Fransisco I was really happy to finally be there. My family and I went and got are bags and then went to go find a taxi to take us to the hotel we were staying in.
The taxi ride was long, but it was a fun ride because I got to lots of the building and cool places. When we got to the hotel, we got the key card and went to are room. It was definetly the coolest hotel room I had ever stayed in. It was like a groovy/funky room with all this cool funiture. The pop-sun chair was my most favorite thing in the room and right when I got into the room I went and sat in it. After we had all cleaned up we left to go hang out with some of my moms friends from college and highschool.
When we met up with my moms friends we went to there house and talked for a while. After that we went to go find a place to eat. We chose to go to a really good buffet that they had gone to before. I got a turkey wing that was a big as my head!!!!!! It tasted really good and so did all the other food. Later we went to go walk around and they showed us lots of cool places. It was a really fun first night in San Fransisco
Hey Aidan! Good job on this! The one thing you should change though is try different words than after to start a sentence.
ReplyDeleteNice description on the turkey wing! Explain more about what you did in San Francisco.
ReplyDeleteNice turkey wing description. You could describe the hotel room better than to just call it groovy/funky.
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